24
Mar
08

refusal poem

the hero at the end of his journey

feels accomplished and proud

in this new world everything is perfect

when the journey is over

the hero must return home

heisitant and not ready

the hero tries to stay put on the journey

instead of  continuing it home


3 Responses to “refusal poem”


  1. 1 mandyjamia
    March 24, 2008 at 1:11 pm

    Nice. You did a good job at explaining this stage of the journey.

  2. 2 gianina
    March 26, 2008 at 12:39 pm

    good poem. was basic but explained everything very well.

  3. 3 heyyaa
    March 26, 2008 at 3:51 pm

    Good job, short but to the point!


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