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Archive for April, 2008
23
Apr
08
siddhartha book review
16
Apr
08
jeopardy
what is a show i never watch?
it took a lot of work
making questions
and decorating the board
it all lasted 5 quick min
and in the end team 2 won
16
Apr
08
the creator
playing as a child
making a sandcastle
playing in the sand
protecting your creation
seems like just instinct
but in the bigger picture
resembles god watching over
his little creations
14
Apr
08
Poem 28
the end is near
my time is soon
soon to be meeting with my fate
i must go on
i must present
to not be nervous
and show my best
09
Apr
08
- freedom
after a journey that is familiar to the hero
the hero is free to live
in a new society or place
that is unfamiliar to the hero
in this strange new place
the hero is lost and miserable
and must go on another journey
to find a better life to be free in
09
Apr
08
+ freedom
after his/her long strenuous journey
the hero is free to live
free to breathe
free to enjoy this new life
with full control of free will
sends the hero on his/her own
to have the life he/she has always wanted
02
Apr
08
final threshold
the final challange
the final gatekeeper
the final threshold
crossing from one world
into another
will the result be for better?
or for worse?
the hero not being able to cross back
must start yet another journey
