02
Apr
08

final threshold

the final challange

the final gatekeeper

the final threshold

crossing from one world

into another

will the result be for better?

or for worse?

the hero not being able to cross back

must start yet another journey


4 Responses to “final threshold”


  1. 1 peggym53
    April 2, 2008 at 5:21 pm

    You make a very good point in your poem that I like, “Will the result be better?” Also that he has to start another journey – how true.

  2. 2 mistershow
    April 2, 2008 at 7:08 pm

    This is a good description of the final threshold.

  3. 3 alijo6704
    April 2, 2008 at 7:20 pm

    I like the idea of will things be better or worse. That’s always the risk you take when you go on any adventure.

  4. 4 iupchc21
    April 7, 2008 at 4:31 pm

    I like how this poem is straight and to the point!!!


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