http://brianatiup.wordpress.com/2008/04/02/final-threshold/ College Writting 101 Mon, 28 Apr 2008 15:37:59 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 http://brianatiup.wordpress.com/2008/04/02/final-threshold/#comment-113 iupchc21 Mon, 07 Apr 2008 16:31:11 +0000 http://brianatiup.wordpress.com/?p=72#comment-113 I like how this poem is straight and to the point!!! I like how this poem is straight and to the point!!!

]]> http://brianatiup.wordpress.com/2008/04/02/final-threshold/#comment-111 alijo6704 Wed, 02 Apr 2008 19:20:34 +0000 http://brianatiup.wordpress.com/?p=72#comment-111 I like the idea of will things be better or worse. That's always the risk you take when you go on any adventure. I like the idea of will things be better or worse. That’s always the risk you take when you go on any adventure.

]]> http://brianatiup.wordpress.com/2008/04/02/final-threshold/#comment-110 mistershow Wed, 02 Apr 2008 19:08:37 +0000 http://brianatiup.wordpress.com/?p=72#comment-110 This is a good description of the final threshold. This is a good description of the final threshold.

]]> http://brianatiup.wordpress.com/2008/04/02/final-threshold/#comment-109 peggym53 Wed, 02 Apr 2008 17:21:43 +0000 http://brianatiup.wordpress.com/?p=72#comment-109 You make a very good point in your poem that I like, "Will the result be better?" Also that he has to start another journey - how true. You make a very good point in your poem that I like, “Will the result be better?” Also that he has to start another journey – how true.

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