09
Apr
08

- freedom

after a journey that is familiar to the hero

the hero is free to live

in a new society or place

that is unfamiliar to the hero

in this strange new place

the hero is lost and miserable

and must go on another journey

to find a better life to be free in


2 Responses to “- freedom”


  1. 1 baglady27
    April 9, 2008 at 8:29 pm

    This is a really good way to look at neg. poetry

  2. 2 baglady27
    April 9, 2008 at 8:29 pm

    This is a really good way to look at neg. freedom


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