Comments on: sight essay http://brianatiup.wordpress.com College Writting 101 Mon, 28 Apr 2008 15:37:59 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 By: Teresa http://brianatiup.wordpress.com/lonely-at-the-bar/#comment-14 Teresa Tue, 18 Sep 2007 18:21:21 +0000 http://brianatiup.wordpress.com/lonely-at-the-bar/#comment-14 ~Brian I loved your essay. I loved that you not only used different sense to describe the taste of pizza but also gave a history of how it originated. I also loved that you gave examples of different pizzas that exist today and what they had on the when they were first made. I absolutely loved your essay. ~Brian
I loved your essay. I loved that you not only used different sense to describe the taste of pizza but also gave a history of how it originated. I also loved that you gave examples of different pizzas that exist today and what they had on the when they were first made. I absolutely loved your essay.

]]> By: Noza http://brianatiup.wordpress.com/lonely-at-the-bar/#comment-10 Noza Tue, 11 Sep 2007 18:20:37 +0000 http://brianatiup.wordpress.com/lonely-at-the-bar/#comment-10 Brian! You did a good job! I liked your essay because it is full of senses and the events that happens in our life. It is incredible just to imagine how many questions and thoughts come when we are looking at someone whon we even do not know. I liked the description of women that you did, about her loneliness and possible thoughts. Not less I liked the senses of lovers that you mentioned. I enjoyed the way how you illustrated these lovers, the way that they looked at each other and their dances. Well-done! Brian! You did a good job!
I liked your essay because it is full of senses and the events that happens in our life. It is incredible just to imagine how many questions and thoughts come when we are looking at someone whon we even do not know. I liked the description of women that you did, about her loneliness and possible thoughts. Not less I liked the senses of lovers that you mentioned. I enjoyed the way how you illustrated these lovers, the way that they looked at each other and their dances.
Well-done!

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